Write a 30-second TikTok script with a hook that lands in the first 2 seconds and a payoff that earns the share.
TOPIC: {what_you_want_to_share}
MY NICHE: {niche}
FORMAT: {talking_head / pov / voiceover / text_overlay / duet}
CALL TO ACTION (optional): {follow? save? part 2?}
SCRIPT STRUCTURE (label each beat with timing):
**0:00-0:02 (hook):** ≤10 words. Must do ONE of:
- Drop a number ('I made $4,200 in 8 days doing this')
- Drop a shocking line ('Your résumé is killing your job search')
- Visual surprise ('Watch what happens when I...')
- Direct address to your viewer ('If you're a [niche], stop doing this NOW.')
**0:02-0:08 (lower the floor):** Make them realize they have the problem too.
**0:08-0:24 (the meat):** 2-3 specific points or steps. NO filler. Each beat = 1 sentence, 1 thing.
**0:24-0:30 (payoff + CTA):** The 'aha' line + a single direct CTA.
RULES:
- Total word count: 70-90 words (about 30 seconds spoken).
- Cuts happen every 2-3 seconds. Mark each [CUT] in the script.
- Include B-roll suggestions in [brackets].
- Don't use 'follow for part 2' unless there's literally a part 2 worth making.
- Sound natural, not scripted. Contractions, fragments, OK.0 copies·0 saves·1 views
199 words·1,190 chars
Sample output
Topic: 'Why most people's LinkedIn About section sucks'
[0:00-0:02 — talking head, sharp cut from black] "Your LinkedIn About section is doing the OPPOSITE of what you think."
[CUT to phone scrolling through generic About sections]
[0:02-0:08] "If yours starts with 'I am a passionate, results-driven...' — congratulations, you sound like 90% of people on this app."
[CUT back to talking head, gesture]
[0:08-0:14] "Recruiters spend 6 seconds. They don't read. They scan for ONE thing: 'is this person specific?'"
[CUT to highlighted bullet on screen: 'BE SPECIFIC']
[0:14-0:24] "Instead of 'experienced product designer' write 'I rebuilt onboarding at Acme so 60% of new users hit their aha moment in 3 minutes.' One concrete sentence beats three vague ones."
[CUT to before/after of an About section, red strikethroughs]
[0:24-0:30] "Open your LinkedIn. Read your first sentence. If it could have been written about ANYONE in your industry — rewrite it tonight."
[CUT to text overlay: 'Comment your industry, I'll roast your first line']
Word count: 86 words.
Parameters
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FAQ
Record the hook 3 different ways — different intonation, different first word. Even small delivery changes on the first 2 seconds can 2-3x retention. The prompt targets ChatGPT (GPT-4) and lives in the Writing & Content category on mycopyprompt.
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